I am now doing real Reviews. So tell me what to review and I will review it. My grading system is:
Yu-Gi-Oh 5Ds: Incredible
Yugioh: Very good
Dragonball Z: good
Avatar: Below Average
Deul Masters: Cheap ripoff
Pokemon:lame and terrible
- Tien is a main Character.
-Tien is married to Launch
-The origin of his third eye is revealed.
-Name of his species makes since because I think the iris is part of the eye.
-haif of the story is a ripoff of DBZ
-Tien and Launch is too predictible.
-His son's name is just a combo of Tien and Launch
-Super Irisian does not sound cool and the discription makes it even lamer.
- The names of his race don't make since. I mean come on:Eleve,Oeil,Ojo,Alumno. I had to use a translator just to figure out what they mean.It turns out that Oeil is french for eye. Eleve is french for pupil. Ojo is spanish for eye. Alumno is spanish for pupil. When a name is a reference to something keep it in the same language and don't use the same reference twice.
I like this story but since half of it is a ripoff of DBZ my grade for it is: Deul Masters.
- Didn't expect Tao to be the villain again.
-That wish made Tao too powerful
-Krillin is the main character.
-Goku and Vegeta along with their youngest sons were killed off.
-Yajorobe saved the day even through Krillin was the main character.
- Why does it has lines?
Grade :Avatar because it was somewhat injoyable.
- GT isn't cannon
- I like the Benefactor
-good story but way too long
-the name doesn't sound exciting.
- no pictures
Goten aint Gohan's son.
All my Fanfics
- Bad grammar
-Keeko is very strong but not unbeatable.
-No pictures of Keeko.
-Saiyan names are supposed to be references to vegetable not snacks.
Grade: YU-Gi-Oh 5Ds
Buu shouldnt exist. he was reincarnated. That means that right after he died He was instantly reborn as Uub.
buu is too weak
Buu is lame.
200 years after GT everyone would be dead
Shenron would not let Goku ride him like a horsey.
Broly is dead.
Broly cant speak full sentences. He can only say kakorot over and over again.
Shenron can only grant 2 wishes not 3.
Super saiyan 5 looks dumb and 6 is way too powerful.
How does Naruto get into the db universe?
Mister Satan cant beat Buu Broly
Who the heck is Dalas?
Shenron dont have a brother.
Makes no sense at all.
Whoah this may be worse than KD
Grade: worst than pokemon. This is 1000x worse than Dragon Ball Evolution.