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This guy seriously needs to get a account, It's kinda annoying talking on a non-account's talk page about not removing templates.
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Ok Gokus power level 2000 and the others where 20? Are you freaking serious? Gokus power level was more then that in the Saiyan Saga his power level 8000 so now after tons of years later he gets weaker? Not to mention everyone has been drastically weakened. There power levels are 20? WTF there weaker then Demon King Piccolo. God this story is bad. Also why is every sentence marked as a heading 3? It looks sloppy and this doesnt even make sence this breaks all canon not to mention Goku left with Shenron for him to still be there makes no sence. I mean SSJ Goku was 150.000.000 so now after he achived SSJ2,3 and 4 and after being proved his base is stronger then a SSJ his now a weak little noob? This is just bad. Sorry but I really dont like it. LSSJ4 23:50, May 12, 2011 (UTC)
I have completely revised it, fixed all to most of the grammar mistakes and added a few more scenes, not only to this but to most other of all the series' pages. Though I'm never changing the storyline. This is hopefully good enough for you. - Ultra Kuzon (talk) 05:25, November 17, 2012 (UTC)
End of Fanon[]
I am going to go ahead and call it quits on this fanon. I actually quit long ago but I will put it into words. I stopped writing this, and any fanon actually, realizing that I can not finish a fanon or a piece of writing in the first place. Though I still do know this as my first fanon on anything, and imo I did frankly good with it (the length and the organization/pics), the plot and stuff took me until a few months ago to realize what I did with it. So now I offiicially close this fanon, and I will always remember writing it and all the times I had on it. TY. -- TheGreatKuzon! (talk) File:Dragon Ball2.png|40px 01:52, April 15, 2014 (UTC)
Congrats on realizing what you did with the plot and stuff! -D-Disk (talk)
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rip in piece kuzon 44th legendary i will wiki will miss u love cordially from KidVegeta (talk)