Bio "My name is Yoshikage Kira. I'm 33 years old. My house is in the northeast section of Morioh, where all the villas are, and I am not married. I work as an employee for the Kame Yu department stores, and I get home every day by 8 PM at the latest. I don't smoke, but I occasionally drink. I'm in bed by 11 PM, and make sure I get eight hours of sleep, no matter what. After having a glass of warm milk and doing about twenty minutes of stretches before going to bed, I usually have no problems sleeping until morning. Just like a baby, I wake up without any fatigue or stress in the morning. I was told there were no issues at my last check-up. I'm trying to explain that I'm a person who wishes to live a very quiet life. I take care not to trouble myself with any enemies, like winning and losing, that would cause me to lose sleep at night. That is how I deal with society, and I know that is what brings me happiness. Although, if I were to fight I wouldn't lose to anyone."
So I began work on Facing Frieza First, but a couple things could use cleaning up.
When Jeice said he was glad he died, did he mean he was glad he died and not Ginyu? I changed the wording, but if I altered it to something else from what you intended, revert it back to the old quote.
Did Bulla use the point-blank Kamehameha to kill Turles? It probably isn't out of the ordinary, but I just wanted to be sure it was her and not someone else present.