User blog comment:Destructivedisk/My New Reviews/@comment-5869016-20130513130126/@comment-3122168-20130513191326

1) "those characters you named me aren't very impressive at all. There's only Ki, Concentration, and Form. I look more for uniqueness of ideas than anything." - I guess we have different definitions of uniqueness. I look for a story with an original plot, interesting characters, and new ideas when looking at uniqueness. I suppose that you look for the highest number of absurd attacks as possible, and there's nothing wrong with that, but it's just not what I fancy.

2) "Sure my battle may not impress your English standards(sure beats the other 2 wikis, Lookout and UDB, mostly)" - Well, I give you credit for this. It's my first pro in the review. Your writing is slightly above average. My problem with your fights isn't so much that the English is bad, but moreso that the fights in general do not make much sense.

3) "but I believe you would do well to actually try and stray from canon for once." - I prefer to expand on canon rather than writing stories that have nothing to do with canon. That is a personal preference.

4) "A little backstory which enhances the main one without contradicting anything would do very well." - Very good. You should take this advice and use it in your own story next time.

5) "Anyway, I didn't think my Geti Goku vs Akoni was good either. Anyway, review Ryan Bang vs James Brog and please do not mention Character Development. It is just a battle for joke purposes." - While I am happy to review your story, are you sure that you want me to? You did not seem to like my last review.

6) "They are not fighting for the safety of the universe or anything, which is part of the reason you can't relate to them(it isn't logical to destroy entire universes regardless)." I don't think you quite understood why I couldn't relate to the characters. It was mostly because they lacked a personality and reasonable motivations. It was not because they weren't fighting for the sake of the universe.

7) "Sure you don't like the abrupt ending, I didn't too, but I'd rather end it at that than to have some absurdly major loss in my universe, which is not my intention" - I am glad that you agree with me in that your story does not end well. However, please do remember that you do control how your story ends, so you could have changed its ending.

Thanks.