User blog comment:Destructivedisk/My New Reviews/@comment-5869016-20130513024859/@comment-3122168-20130513030452

Okay, I'm going to try to be as mature about this as possible.

1) "There's a reason why my pages are there. This is just a fight scene." - This is information that you need to provide me with. I am not omniscient. I do not know what your pages are about. Considering that you asked me to review those pages, I figured that you wanted me to review those pages. I then reviewed those pages.

2) "Im sorry my tenses do not fit your requirements" - They are not arbitrary requirements that I came up with. They are rules of the English language. As the story is written in English, it is fair of me to critique the story's english.

3) "all I see are 40 cons" - If you do not want to see cons, you should not request for me to review your story.

4) "and the fact that you didn't bother reading my pages." - This is not because I hate you or anything. It is because I am not going to seek out pages that you did not tell me to read. I am reviewing what you show. If you cannot adequately explain those pages in your story, there is no reason for you to require me to read forty other pages just so I might have a slight understanding of your story.

5) "My characters are incredibly powerful" - Yes, and this is a problem. When your characters are too powerful, it makes them uninteresting to read about because they become basically immune to everything and can't be hurt. They also lose every type of relatability.

6) "immortality is in the age sense." - Either way, they instantly regenerate even when they're deatomized, so they're practically immortal. It's still uninteresting and pointless to read.

7) "And no, Gogeta is a standalone fusion which went on and supported the army" - This is not explained in the story. Therefore, I did not know about it. However, you could explain it. Even if it were explained, it wouldn't help much, as Gogeta wouldn't make much of an impact in the grand scope of this interdimensional war. His power isn't close to what you're portraying in the story.

8) "Maybe you could show me something more interesting before giving me some irrelevant cons?" - Sorry boss. I guess I'm just not qualified to review your story. Hopefully you can find someone intelligent to give you an interesting critique of your story.