User blog comment:MonkeyBoyGoku/Busy, Busy!/@comment-3013726-20121204212415

I like your storyu so far, but here's my advice. DO NOT EVER OVERPOWER. MAKE SURE THAT IF ANYONE IS STRONGER THAN IN THE SHOW, YOU CLEARLY EXPLAIN WHY. OVERPOWERING WILL CAUSE YOUR STORY TO HAVE ALOT OF HATERS.