User blog comment:KidVegeta/KidVegeta's reviews/@comment-1821137-20110121100349

Yeah, I understand that. The thing is that the backup for this would be the past Z episodes, which stayed the same. I might make a special for Gohan, IDK. I believe I can fix that. I meant to write it in ST style so it came out a little silly. Present Gohan would want to stop the future one from fighting Cell. Future Gohan just did it to make him unconscious for a little until he kills Cell. Lazynesss.......
 * Begins too abruptly. I understand that you want to start it immediately in the fight, but there needs to be some kind of structure for the reader. Check out Dragon Ball Z: IR to see how I tackle this issue.
 * Sometimes wording is hard to understand, but I realize that English is not your native language.
 * Don't understand why future Gohan slapped his present day self.
 * Not updated often.