User blog comment:SSWerty/Should ST be updated?/@comment-3122168-20110518020957/@comment-1668079-20110518060819

I really wasn't trying to get confrontational or defensive at all. I'm sorry if you took that the wrong way, I just felt as if your comment wasn't totally necessary. I'm not trying to push anyone away here, or offend anyone, nor am I trying to decieve people into thinking I'm the best here. I write for my own satisfaction. That's the main reason for this revamp; I wasn't satisfied with the original ST, I wanted to redo it. If I can get some outside help as well I'll try and use it.

Now, back to the topic on hand. That style of writing isn't as much of a show as you think, it honestly is what I find easiest in creative writing. I'm not writing to impress the wiki, I'm writing what is easiest for me. As strange as that may sound, it's true. When it comes to the flow is where I fall down. What I need is for you to be more specific in your feedback; is it grammatical flow, or story flow? Or a mixture of both? And is the order of my paragraphs decent? Or off, cos I felt like it was off?

Saying that, I would still appreciate it if I didn't have as much scrutiny on my works. I don't want your feedback to disappear totally, I certainly do need it, but I would prefer if I had a little more 'air', so to speak. I originally joined this wiki to have some fun writing DBF, and that is why I'm still here. I don't like having that feeling of being pressured to write lots in one go or to be able to improve drastically in one day; I just want to be able to enjoy the social aspects of the wiki and to write some bits of my story when I feel like it. Again, please don't interpret this a defensive attempt.