Talk:Where'd You Go?

This is a pretty good story, but it's a bit boring and most of the story is about Goten and Trunks hanging out instead of him wondering about his dad. I think there should be more of that. But it does have good writing and is pretty good. I'm impressed with you, NM. We don't need no education!  We don't need no thought control!  01:05, July 11, 2011 (UTC)