User blog:SpiritBomb

Hello guys, recently I've been working on a fan fction The Story of Retzu, and I was wonndering if it was a good story or not? I posted it on my usual site to post fan fiction, but the Users there always say everything is cool, so it's hard to tell if they like my story. So I was wondering if someone here could maybe read it and give me an honest review! Thanks! =D