Talk:Dragon Ball NC

Review
Well, I'm not quite certain if this is where you put reviews on here or not, but I'm going to put mine here regardless. I have to say that I did like the story. The fight scenes were well written and somewhat detailed, and it's good that you finally gave Mr. Satan a chance to do some actual fighting and show that he was actually strong enough to beat up normal human beings. However, my main problem with the story is grammar. It's somewhat sloppy, and could use some work. Overall, I give it a 7/10. Destructivedisk