User blog comment:Ire flowa222/fav. fanfiction/@comment-3256091-20101227155222/@comment-3122168-20101228090336

Suddenly, that story doesn't seem as thrilling anymore.

But in all actuality, I think you should do a two-story-in-one episode where you go over both the origin of Tien and Chiaotzu. That way, at least, you wouldn't have to expand their character too much.