Talk:Kakarot Who? (Dragon Ball What If...)

Major mistake
Hello, your story is great, but it contains a major mistake: ''The planet shook violently and Broly began to cry. Paragus set his son's pod for the first planet he could think of, Earth. The small sphere blasted off into the heavens and was gone. Seconds later, Planet Vegeta was tearing apart. Paragus smiled and flew up, heading for Bardock.''

''As for Kakarot, Bardock's son didn't survive the planet's explosion. He was scheduled to be sent to Earth but the scientists had run out of space pods. Paragus put Broly in the last one.... ''

See? you really got to fix that dude.. 18:50, September 22, 2011 (UTC)