Thread:KidVegeta/@comment-878739-20170702013603/@comment-3097771-20170702055356

So from what I see, you go into a ton of detail on that page. I'd recommend making the sections more like summaries of the various points in the Time Crusade, as opposed to detailing every little thing that happens. Aside from that, you use the same organizational techniques as the Zero Mortals Plan page, so I'm not sure how else to improve that aspect.