The KidVegeta Anthology/Redacted Scenes

While not posted on this site, I feel the need to give a brief commentary on these pieces. They are sexual in nature, so if you don't like that, don't read them. There are three total scenes:

Story
1. Apology - Ledas X Miki

2. Innocent Luck - Ledas and (unconscious) Ryori X Nurse Yorokobi

3. Bedtime - Ledas and Ryori X Chaiva

Apology
Scene 1: Takes place in Dragon Ball Z: The Forgotten, Planet Earth Saga, at the end of chapter 6, Mist.

Originally, the first redacted scene was going to be with Ryori's sister. However, as the story of The Forgotten evolved, Ryori's sister ceased to exist. This was mainly due to the removal of the Kyokatshi Saga, which was originally going to take place before the Reunion Saga, and feature Cardinal and this guy named Ishida searching for the alien who killed Mr. Kyokatshi. Basically, a sort of Death Note-y type of story for a saga. Ryori's sister was going to be a big part in this, hiding things from those men (because she would know what Ledas actually was). Once the Kyokatshi Saga was removed, Ishida completely deleted, and the Cardinal story refined and streamlined to fit within the Planet Earth Saga, Ryori no longer needed a sister for the plot. And anything which was not crucial to either plot or character development was scrapped.

The panty raid was added in after Ryori's sister's removal, and after I did that, I realize that a scene would work out with him returning the pair that he kept. It would be too luck-based to have the random pair he took be Ryori's sister, so I never recreated her for this scene. That being said, the girl he returned it to was still not very important, so she didn't need to be in anything other than the redacted scene. Since she doesn't have sex with Ledas and take his virginity, she ultimately only exists in the redacted scene. Miki herself was simply chosen to be a high school student, as I wanted her to be older than him. Her name is a Japanese name I like, although the kanji I picked for her are somewhat of an uncommon combination. Her name was also based on the character Miki from the Miki Falls manga, although I do not think they share the same kanji. Since I tend to like it when the girls are older than the boys, she was made 16 years old. And that was plenty old enough to work in the story. There has been some hinting by me on Miki's bio that Ledas would have gone to Miki more than once, after they did what they did. I feel like it doesn't much matter either way, and keeping it ambiguous is helpful. However, one thing is that they never did have sex even if he did go back.

Innocent Luck
Scene 2: Takes place in Dragon Ball Z: The Forgotten, Fulfillment Saga Saga, at the end of chapter 11, Sticky Fingers.

This scene was written specifically to bridge between the first scene and the third. I didn't want Ledas to have sex for the first time with a human, but I also didn't want him to go into full-blown sex with Chaiva after doing relatively little with Miki. So Yorokobi was sort of a second round of gaining experience for him. Honestly, there isn't much to say about this story. I based Yorokobi off of Nurse Joy from Pokemon, giving her pink hair, and making her a nurse. Her Japanese name simply means Joy, so again it's a reference.

Yorokobi's interest in drugging her patients and then doing things to them is something that nurses actually do, albeit somewhat rarely and not often reported. I felt like it was easier to have her have sex with Ryori, since he was human, and had already admitted to having sex with various people at school. But for Ledas, it was never going to happen. I always intended it to first be Chaiva, and later the mother of Nir.

Bedtime
Scene 3: Takes place in Dragon Ball: Cold Vengeance, chapter 8 Bedtime.

Bedtime was written before Cold Vengeance was, and we pretty much made Cold Vengeance to get to this scene. Originally when I wrote it, there was no plans of a story, I just wanted to use Hyper Zergling's female full-blooded Saiyan character. I felt like Ledas should lose his virginity to a Saiyan, and she was pretty much the only options sans creating a new character (something which never crossed my mind).

Basically, there wasn't pre-planning for what each character would do. I will admit that I fapped twice in a row as I wrote this piece, and what they did was basically whatever I wanted while I was in that state. Interesting to note is that Chaiva was lactating at the time due to having recently given birth to Cuber's son, so I was briefly into that while writing, but I don't think I'm into it anymore. It's a weird thing that's never happened to me with anything else before.

Anyways, after Ledas finally enters her front side, that is the first time he'd ever been inside a woman, so he goes Super Saiyan when losing his virginity. Since he wasn't powered up at all, 50x his base strength was minimal, and she could take it; coupled with her being a Saiyan and being naturally stronger than a human, it makes logical sense that she could have no problem with it. I have listed the power levels on the power levels page if anyone is curious, but they don't ever go very high. This was probably my favorite scene of the three, and clearly Hyper Zergling's as well, since he pretty much fapped to nothing but this scene for a long period of time. I also agree that it is that good.

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