User blog:Hyper Zergling/HZ's Reviews

After Desctructivedisk pestered asked me to make a review blog, I decided to. But be warned, it won’t be updated very often, due to my personal life, and the fact that I have a lack of attention span, so reading horrendous fan fictions will take a long time.

Rating Categories:
 * KidVegeta Perfect
 * Destructivedisk Exceptional
 * Very Good
 * Mediocre
 * Below Mediocre
 * Pretty Bad
 * Supersaiyian11 Worst Possible

Note: It will be very unlikely that any of your fan fictions will lie in the upmost or worst category:

Pros

 * Very original
 * No overpowering
 * Humans now play a greater role
 * Canon characters keep their personalities

Cons

 * Tao is too “random”
 * Tao should be dead, due to Super Buu. The explanation supplied, although possible, is insanely unlikely.
 * Fat Buu is out of existence
 * Chiaotzu and Yajirobe beating the hypothetical Frieza
 * Dende would have understood the situation at hand and sacrifice himself.

Overall Rating
Very Good

Pros

 * Canon characters somewhat keep their personalities
 * Nothing above SSJ4

Cons

 * Terrible, terrible grammar and spelling, if not for my corrections, not to mention new additions also have poor grammar now
 * Story needs explaining
 * Descriptions are too straightforward and redundant, resulting in utter boredom
 * Pan getting mad at Krillin for hitting her during the tournament
 * Goten wouldn’t be pissed during his tournament fight with Trunks

More pros or cons will be added after I re-read the story

Overall Rating
Pretty Bad