User blog:Tricktron/Tricktron's Reviews

Alright. I'm starting reviews. Let's go.

Pros
non existant..

Cons
-'Dragon Bomb 2 is the sequel to Dragon Bomb and does not host to very few to no humor. It will cotain mostly fights and/or death scenes.' That literally makes no grammatical sense, and contain is spelt wrong.

-'Frieza punched Cooler. Cooler chocked Frieza.' Sudden fight for literally no reason.

-'King Cold walked in and pulled them a part and smashed their heads together knocking them out.' wow that is horrible parenting.

-'Cell is fighting against Cooler in hell. Cell blasts Cooler into a side of a mountain. Cooler counters with a barage of ki attacks. Cell and Cooler enter a stand off of their ki attacks. Soon Cell begins to loose and is blasted far off into the distance with his body being blone up.' Wait how did Cooler get in hell? Did King Cold kill him? Best parent gg no re. And what happened to Cell? Once again, very bad grammar and blown is spelt wrong. So is barrage.

-'"Woops. No more body for Cell."said Cooler laughing.' Okay, apparently Cooler started talking like Buu. Poor grammar. And Cell would shit on Cooler.

-'Vegeta laid on the ground dying laughing at all his enemies that were waiting for him to die.' What? When did he suddenly get murdered? Who are his enemies? SO MANY QUESTIONS!

-'"Your all pathetic.' Vegeta, you're a literal god who got beat by some unnamed enemies who you should shit on.

-'You have armies fight your battles. If you would hav takin me on on at a time i would have won."said Vegeta dying. One by one they started blasting him with beams killing him faster while he laid on the ground dying slowly.' *have *taken *one *I

-'"Is that all you got?"' Vegeta, you're dying. Shut your trap.

-'he said about to die when Gohan showed up with a senzu bean."Now let's try this again."as his enemies took off running. He just blasted them all with the help of Gohan.' What? Why is Gohan here? Why does Vegeta suddenly curbstomp them with no difficulty? Sure Gohan's there but if they beat Vegeta they should stomp Gohan's skull in.

-Literally every picture is directly from the anime, or some other artist. Or just a recolor that is probably also from another user.

-I haven't died of cringe yet.

-'Broly and Kid Buu were blasting and hitting each other. Broly took a swing at Buu, but he just dogded it. Buu teleported behind Broly and smashed him into the ground. Broly stood up only to be smashed into the ground again. Buu grabbed him and started to swing him around and around until he let him go and he went through a mountain. Broly was ferious and charged at Buu who just dogded his attack and jumped on him and bit him.' This one is actually a realitivly decent paragraph but those pesky spelling errors. (*dodged *furious *dodged [again]) And why the hell did Buu bite him? That's Goku's move.

(Saving, not done yet, unfortunately.