User blog comment:KidVegeta/KidVegeta's reviews/@comment-1668079-20101101071844

Thanks for the review of ST. I really felt that you did the most honest review of ST. For once (fans and reviewers don't take offense here; my thoughts on the reviews), it wasn't someone saying "OMG!! IT'S AMAZING!! EVERYTHING IS GREAT!!" or something along those lines.

I really agree with everything you've said on the cons list. If you don't mind, I've written a list of my thoughts on the cons list. (This may sound like I'm resentful of what you've written; honestly, I'm not. I love feedback):


 * Lots of inconsistencies: I agree with that and it's been nagging my mind ever since I finished ST. I'm a lazy person so I didn't really go back to explain anything; hence why I created the Mysteries Explained page.


 * SS5 & SS6: I also would have liked ST more if I had proper explanations for these. The reasoning for these forms is, again, lazy writing. Perhaps, if I ever decide to update and improve ST, I'll change it so it's more consistent.


 * Return of Buu: You guessed it; lazy writing. I have always liked the character of Buu and thought that he could use a tad more viewing time, so to speak (or type). I always wanted to use the idea of the True Super Saiyan, and I already had that thought out when I started writing, so I needed a catalyst for the future events and Buu was my first choice (again, too lazy to think of a character).


 * Lack of buildup in story (ie... Uub's death): I completely agree with this. I have no real explanation for this, just my narrative skills at the time. I like to think that I have improved in that, so I can do a better job for my next FF (more on that later).


 * Goku beating Vegeta (too predictable) : I also agree with this completely. I really didn't know what to do, so I just made it that Goku won again. For the rest of the series though, I did try to make them more or less equal, to please all the fans.


 * True Super Saiyan turning out to be Goku and Vegeta (split): I can see why this could be considered a bad move. I also agree that it was predictable, but I don't like it when random Saiyans just turn up without any real reason why they weren't killed by Frieza (there's always the obvious "they were absent from Planet Vegeta when it blew up" excuse' not really a fan of that)


 * Goku using the spirit bomb... again: I didn't really want to use it the Buu Reborn Saga, though I didn't really have any ideas on how to finish him. I mainly created it for the Creation Saga, but I was too eager to express all my ideas in the Buu Renorn Saga; another reason why Goku and Vegeta are SS5 without any proper explanation.

To end on a happy note, I am going to be writing another fanfic. It's going to be set after GT - Keep reading before you say anything (directed at anyone) - and will not, that's right, not focus on the Z Fighters, though there will be brief cameos - no longer than a paragraph or two. It will focus on my own created characters and the strongest character who fights will be around Cell's strength.

And, spoiler alert, all those who are fans of Serroli; he plays an important role in the third and (possibly) fourth saga(s).