User blog comment:Destructivedisk/D-Disk Reviews/@comment-4014441-20110524115537/@comment-4014441-20110525120017

Thank you very much!

I will talk about the cons you gave me a little, if that's ok. You've made valid points.

Now, about the juvenlie writing, I think it's how I write in general, I'll try to fix it.

I will write about their evolution later, when I work it out in my mind. As for the circulation thing, well, I just wanted to add it since in Dragon Ball, many creatures who get on a planet of strong gravity (They are not used to) would probably die of circulation, since gravity technically pulls blood down and all (I watched it on some scientific chanell).

I admit that the Rollercoaster was silly, I'll delete it I guess.

And connection... Well, I am planning on making a story including Kitrans so I kinda wrote the article for them first as they'll pay a major role.