Talk:Suzumiya Kisuke (Lookout II)/@comment-3097771-20170413194324

Some thoughts on this character:

+good page organization

+good template usage

+backstory is decent

-personality is uninteresting and shows a lack of understanding of human psychology

-this is going to be harsh, but you need to hear it, as evidently no one has said this to you before: your character's moves are ridiculous, overpowered, uninteresting, and some of the laziest god-modding I've ever seen. It's incredibly easy to just write "my character can dodge anything" or "my character has mastered every martial arts". This is HORRENDOUS writing, writing of the lowest quality. It's a shame because the writer of this article is coherent and appears to be of an age to have outgrown such nonsense. In the future, I hope to see characters with better power balance, as no one with any sense of quality should take this character seriously.

-KidVegeta (talk)