User blog:SSWerty/The Swetty reviews

Well, after KidVegeta pestured me into this, I've decided to finally do some reviews for this little wiki. I'll try and keep the reviews at a good length, not too long, not too short. I'll give my honest thoughts, no matter how dickish they are.

Grading system
My grades are as follows:
 * 10/10 - Perfect
 * 9/10 - Amazing
 * 8/10 - Excellent
 * 7/10 - Above above average
 * 6/10 - Above average
 * 5/10 - Average
 * 4/10 - Okay, but needs a bit of work
 * 3/10 - Awful
 * 2/10 - Sh*t
 * 1/10 - This

Pros

 * Interesting premise where not much has been expanded on
 * The underlying themes of the tale are delivered wonderfully, not too complex, yet not too obvious
 * Each saga has a seperate feel to it; this I like
 * The canon characters are true to their persona, for the most part; and the fanons are a joy to read about and gradually unravel their characters
 * A lot of good depth within the plot
 * The Benefactor, his special and his interactions with all
 * Jokes in the little description things
 * Your persistance; it must be really boring having to write all that out
 * The Roshi/Krillin-ness of Ryori

Cons

 * Prince Vegeta Saga gets a bit tedious after awhile, especially after his first mission
 * Lauto saga was far too long; that was the reason why I initially dropped off following it
 * The orange font hurts my eyes a little when reading Lauto.
 * Guva and Banas; they bore me
 * Ledas in PES saga is a bit too much like kid Goku/Goten for me
 * Mrs. Fanshi taking Ledas in straight away; a bit creepy, if you ask me
 * The Reunion saga feels rushed and not at the same quality of your other works

Overall Mark and closing comments
While it is an amazing story with nice twists of action and comedy, and it is a grand premise, several things bug me while reading. The atrocious length of Lauto Saga really put me off for a good time, as it was too much too quickly. But having said that, it is one of the best fanons here.

8/10

Up next
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 * Tien: Origins
 * Dragon Ball Z: In Requiem
 * Dragon Ball: The Mrovian Trilogy
 * Dragon Ball: Legacies