User blog:Nimbus.69/Your thoughts

Hey, it's Nimbus.69 asking for your thoughts on The Terror Of the Androids. Tell me if you think the story is good or not, and why not give it a rating?

Characters overall The characters are very nicely expressed and they are very descriptive Characters are described pretty well The characters do need some improvement, but are overall well The characters are poorly expressed and devinatly need improvement A five year old can do better

The plot The plot is AWSHUM The plot is alright so far The plot is not too good and needs to be improved, but is overal OK The plot is poor and dull The plot is worst than GT, and that is saying something

Dialouge Jaden: ABSOLUETLY FLAWLESS The dialouge is well expressed and overall very good The dialouge has grammar issues here and there, but I guess it's okay The dialouge is poor and needs improvement The daialouge is just...ugh

The OC Tamera Tamera is a great character so far Tamera is overal well balanced and is good so far Tamera needs imrpovement, but is ok Tamera needs to swear less and is bratty, but she has her momments Tamera is a bitch i wanna strangle and throw into a fire and throw the ashes out to sea

Panisa Panisa is a great character overal and I wish to have sex Panisa is well balanced, has a few flaws, but is pretty great Panisa has a bunch of uneeded flaws, but oh well Panisa is annoying as shit I HATE HER SO MUCH