User blog comment:Frieza Sama/Frieza Sama's Reviews Part 1/@comment-3097771-20110104121051/@comment-3256091-20110104121513

Lack of Pictures: No Pictures. Pictures makes your fan fiction attractive and colorful.

Style of Writing: I like the IP style of writing.

Underpowering: Strongest power level 8,000,000? When the highest in Z goes up to 1 trillion!

Ledas acts too childish: Saiyans are tough not girlish. A bit childish is ok, but a bit too much is bad. Gosh, Ledas reminds me of L Lawliet/Ryuzaki.