User blog comment:KidVegeta/Announcing My Next Story/@comment-3097771-20101205032510/@comment-3122168-20101205043547

Okay, i can try. Sorry, I was just pointing it out in case you had forgotten or something.


 * Vegeta's Journey- I understand that you want to give some insight into the character of Frieza, but his character is just too straightforward for my tastes. I mean, he's part of a mean, extremely powerful race, he has a brother who is stronger than him, and a father who is domineering and also quite strong, etc. There's simply not much to be said.
 * A Million To One...- To be honest, I just fail to care about either of the characters. To me, this just seems, well, unlikely to be taken seriously. "Hey look, I'm on a random planet, hey look it's Raditz! How do I know who he is? No idea! i'm going to go recruit him for Frieza's army.
 * Two for one: Zarbon and Dodoria- Just seems uninteresting. It has potential, but I care so little for either of those relatively weak characters that I wouldn't care for a story about them.
 * Bibidi's Story- The character holds no interest for me. I just don't care about him/her.
 * Last One Out- Seems kinda like a silly adventure story. Just like they're wandering around and come across this big tower in the sky, and then it's Goonies time.

As I said, it's personal taste. I will be more than willing to give them a chance, though.