User blog:Nexus-Ank'hu/Question for Everyone

This is an excerpt of my story from Microsoft Word, Hotmail.

''The two stepped out of the building, strapped in cloaks. If you looked closely, you could see it's scratches as a scarf stretched down the man. He stood silent, breathing slowly. He then walked forward, and sent his hand to the man infront of him, speaking. 'You.... You're a fool.' ''

Was that good? (It's not actually in Italics)