User blog comment:KidVegeta/KidVegeta's reviews/@comment-24767363-20160417144507/@comment-24767363-20160608201019

I am VERY satisfied with a C. TBH, I would have thought that I would get an E or at most a D, especially for a story I had time restraints for (due to a contest) and for being my first one! I don't really think its good either, escpecially about 'Super Bear' and the ending was more of a segway for the sequel to happen. I'm glad that there was some enjoyment in it, and I will improve the story with the 'remastered' version (Don't know if you'lk review that because its technically a re-review but IDK).