User blog comment:KidVegeta/KidVegeta's reviews/@comment-1821137-20110312125727/@comment-3097771-20110313210822

If you don't know how to make interesting dialogue, then of course I'm going to keep that as a fault. And of course that makes it legitimate.
 * Boring Dialogue:

To be honest, I only caught it changing twice... and it may have been dialogue. But it's too hard to tell, and I really don't want to go back and look again. I'm not even going to go into why Goku wouldn't know this word. But he doesn't know it. Thanks for fixing that. I dunno. I still think it's a very weak storyline if you gotta lower Goku's power level so much to be on par with Ichigo. To lessen confusion you prolly shouldn't have used any Super Saiyan levels then, eiither. Or Kaioken. Because then we get to the point where Goku is at least 800x stronger than Ichigo, within your story. I know you probably just wanted to show off Goku's transformations, but it really does hurt the credibility of your story. Not for one second, until I read the trivia AT THE END did I think Ichigo could have ever even touched Goku. Hence why I hated the story.
 * Constant changing of style of writing. Ie: sometimes it’s in 3rd person, other times in 2nd person:
 * Shinigami word:
 * Hair turns blue:
 * All OP cons:

Hope you find all that to be clear enough. -KidVegeta