User blog comment:KidVegeta/Short Story/@comment-3122168-20101228234614/@comment-3122168-20101229010215

Personally, I feel that your small character roster could lead to monotonous story and dialog. -KidKrillin 01:02, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

I disagree completely. The complexities of the characters and how different they all are makes different parts of the story unique to each other and not monotonous at all. -KidVegeta