User blog:SupremeVegeta15/FanFiction Reviews

I am doing reviews but instead of giving my honest opinion I will point out every problem in the stories.I got the idea from distuctivedisk.

Dragonball IP

boy is this story's bad.First off Krillin is the main character.I mean what is the guy an idiot.Goku is the main character of every dragonball series.Krillin dies once every [mailto:series.@nd series. 2nd] Tao being the villian is not even remotely possible.correct me if I'm wrong but weren't only the good guys brought back when he back to life after buu destroyed the earth?Tao was evil so he would of stayed dead.3rd why did dende have to die?Couldn't one of them just made a wish before Tao did?4th wouldnt Goten and Trunks of tried Fusion once they sensed Tao's power level and become Gotenks and use that ghost attack to kill Tao right away.5th Why havent Goku or Vegeta been metioned yet.6th Krillin dies.First rule of anime:Never kill off the main character unless he is going to get stronger while dead.7th Tao is clearly human in your story but he became a cyborg in the original dragonball.How did he get his body back?Oh that's right he didn't.

his gets a 50 out of 100 since it was somewhat enjoyable.