User blog comment:SonikFan112/Sonik's Reviews/@comment-1821137-20110628075346

Ahhh, nice review.

Well, the part with the Moses speaking and stuff is bad on purpose. If there are lots of mistakes in the first part, then ok. Okay. Could write it, don't think you'd like it. Probably, however, you should've said "This crossover didn't work" or something as this sentence is more of a generalization than a con. I saw that. Was too lazy to fix. Cool. I've watched Dragon Ball Abridged, however, I've never seen the episodes with "nerd" in them. That's why I wasn't referencing anything. Haz no idea. The point was for the things to be fast. Cool. Were? Dun't insult Hulk. Cooolz. I agree, Yugioh stuff was from its abridged series, so it wasn't original or anything. Wat? No. My mean was to make a big number. He's a cool char with great development, I just put him in the story. Eh... Hitler is bad, Moses is good. What's bad with them fighting. I was not meaning that really, duh. You will never see the true meaning.
 * The spelling and grammar in this story isn’t very good.
 * The Bible. This really can’t end well, being that I’m a Christian…
 * Suddenly, Goten is gay. For no reason. Also, I know this is comedy, but I really WOULD like a reason for this.
 * Crossovers usually don’t work very well with DB, anyways. Especially with Yugioh…
 * The characters don’t say “SSJ”. You could at least type out “Super Saiyan”.
 * Piccolo trying to lampshade the whole regenerating thing… just doesn’t work.
 * Oh, nerd. Great, a bunch of shitty Dragon Ball Abridged references…
 * Why are there quotes around Doomsday?
 * And things just keep happening so extremely fast it really isn’t funny.
 * Vegeta constantly yelling nerd is not funny.
 * SS25 is a shitty joke as well. It’s been done.
 * And then the Hulk appears.
 * Goten just pointing out things and then Vegeta yelling “nerd” isn’t funny, it’s stupid and repetitive.
 * A bunch of retarded Yugioh stuff that isn’t funny at all.
 * SSJ*mashes random numbers on keyboard*
 * …Oh great, Moses.
 * Hitler AND Moses. I feel insulted.
 * And then God. RB, are you just trying to insult my religion as much as you can?
 * And then Hulk gets split in two and Moses turns him gay. What.

Closing Comments: I'd say you were biased at this point. Saying Batman was the only good thing, meh. Anyway, cool review.