User blog comment:SSWerty/The Swetty reviews/@comment-3097771-20110408054641/@comment-1668079-20110408083139


 * While this was already done very skillfully, I would have preferred it if a little more emphasis on Buu's sorrow and loss was made, especially from his angle. While still done very well, that part, I think was a little rushed.

I... actually thought this might have been a tad overdone. I dunno, perhaps you could shed more light on this one?


 * It seems rushed, as in the previous chapter he has just realized that he's powerless, then a few paragraphs later he's on his way with Baba. I reckon maybe a couple more paragraphs on Buu's struggle with his loss would have been a bit better; not needed but a nice addition. Just to show how he wallowed in his anguish a little more.