User blog comment:Fedora Lord Para 348/ParaGoomba348's Reviews/@comment-3000576-20110718115629

"You owe me 3 breaks now."

- You

Best part of review for Yami. Anyways, I'm going to respond to your cons for WYG.

I would need some description on what scenes. This sounds like the exact same con as above, but, again, specify. I updated that part yesterday. Same as above. ...I don't know what to say. That was a line from the song it was based off of (see title, or trivia.) I probably will replace that, though.
 * Kind of boring at some parts.
 * Some scenes seemed kind of dull.
 * Most of it seemed to be about Goten and Trunks' hanging out, which I think kind of deterred the actual plot away.
 * The last scene was a bit lazy.
 * It probably would have been better if it weren't a one-shot.
 * The poem at the beginning was kind of lackluster.