User blog comment:Namekimanie/Namekimanie's reviews/@comment-7890302-20130718205306/@comment-12609788-20130718210707

Tao likes Shen, yes but his cold attitude would probably express it differently.

Mr. Black called Tao a "good man" and one mafia boss in the Z filler called him his hero. Tao is a famous assassin so I think he would be somewhat respected among underworld as well as those examples make me think he wouldn't be hated by almost anyone he met. Assassin like Tao is hated by many but not by "almost anyone he met". While I kinda understand your point, I still have disagree a little.

I can't think anyone thinking "oh, God" nor "oh, Kami" by anyone in DB.

How is "I hate that brat" an accident?

Tao would use different words than usual cussing words.

You could told how Tao thinks when unsure if he survives, who created Tao's cybernetics, what did he do in Tien Shinhan saga, did he try to have revenge on Korin etc.

My first review was not perfect but I think it's fine.