User blog comment:SSWerty/Should ST be updated?/@comment-3122168-20110518020957

Now now, Werty, I read over the new prologue. I do like it a bit more than the last one, but you are so horribly lacking in one area: flow. You try to write at such a high level, yet, and I mean no offense by this, but I don't feel like you should be trying so hard to write well. It would actually be better, in my opinion, if you wrote in a way that felt comfortable, as it typically reads better. Perhaps you should write a bit more simply and a bit more naturally, as I think it would be better overall.