User blog comment:KidVegeta/Prince Vegeta Saga completed!/@comment-3000576-20101106172950

Although I like TF, I still have a few problems:

1. Layeeck seems out of character in the second flashback. He wouldn't tell Ledas that someone stronger will kill Frieza (which would probably lead to Ledas dying because of Frieza.

2. Killing/Pretending to kill off The Benefactor seems a bit weird. Killing The Benefactor would be like killing LawlEcos too early in SA, it would leave a mysterious character dying. Pretending to kill him would be a bit unoriginal. (like in real-life movies. Saw II anyone?) Although, I like how you didn't say he died.

3. Vegeta's reaction to Planet Vegeta being destroyed by an "asteroid." In the special, he hid almost (if not) all of his sadness telling Nappa. In TF, Vegeta didn't react like he should have.

4. Frieza's reaction to The Benefactor killing Layeeck. Sure, it was sadistic, but Frieza wouldn't have been disturbed. Maybe a bit scared, but not disturbed.

5. Layeeck's personality seems too similar to Bardock's.

6. The Benefactor's death is unoriginal.

7. No quote boxes in the saga itself, only in character pages.

Seven factors need fixing a bit.