User blog comment:KidVegeta/KidVegeta's reviews/@comment-24767363-20161218032730/@comment-24767363-20161221024229

Yeah...I was on time contraints and I know it's not good...still better than most other stories :P. Allow me to explain, even though it should've been explained in the text

1. "Purrenta Distoria" is Japanese for "Planet Destroyer". The planet destroyer is Mira. It wouldn't make sense for them to know his actual name.

2. Yeah, that was worded weridly...the Namekians basically use that wish to go to Earth. Online never specifies what the other wishes were used for

3. The Neo Turtle/Crane schools are the New Turtle/Crane Schools. I felt "Neo" would be a better word for it, though

4.Dehydration thing...yeah, that's fair

5. I had to make it fit with Online to fit the "random page" part. Those Nameks could've used the Dragon Balls...but it still faults the story itslef, yeah

6. I dunno. I suppose "corrupted" wasn't the best word. More like "revenge hungry". Their leader and more than half of their clan was killed. I think that would make them become at least a little evil

7. Yeah...no time ta think things through. Yeah...it was bad.