User blog comment:SSWerty/The Swetty reviews/@comment-3097771-20110323080734/@comment-1668079-20110323082542

The orange font hurts my eyes a little when reading Lauto.
 * This is definitely the worst con of all.

Guva and Banas; they bore me
 * It's not really their characters, I don't tend to get annoyed with characters themselves, but rather how they interact with others. Something just didn't click and I felt bored reading through their dialogue. They had some brilliant parts, but there weren't enough.

Ledas in PES saga is a bit too much like kid Goku/Goten for me
 * I felt like you had kind of dropped what was his a little. Not too much, but enough for me to get a bit confused as to why he was acting so unlike himself. I understand your reason, but I'm still think you went a bit too far the other way.

Mrs. Fanshi taking Ledas in straight away; a bit creepy, if you ask me
 * Pedobear, hiding in the woods...

The Reunion saga feels rushed and not at the same quality of your other works
 * I dunno. When I initially read it, I got the impression that a lot of effort was put into the development of the saga, but that it felt like you were a little too hasty in releasing it. Not to say I didn't enjoy it, I've been looking forward to the Benefactor returning, but that was my first thought.