User blog comment:Piccolo The Super Namek/My Version Of Fan-Fic Reviews - Part 1/@comment-1780020-20100825193609/@comment-3000576-20100826011911

I agree with Piccolo the Super Namek, partially. You have officially twisted the official GT storyline (I actually thought it wasn't possible, because I succeed to rewrite the whole GT storyline without messing anything up,) and actually screwed up. In fact, the first three sentences don't even have an explaination and I quote: "Marron was just relaxing by Trunks' house. Vegeta comes out of the house and finally sees Marron. Marron saw Vegeta bronze out a knife to kill Marron." Just. Terrible. Do at least some research. Sorry, but I'm naturally critical.

But I don't think that kind of story should get banned. Just hoping your next fan fiction is better than this.

And also, Broly would only kill someone like that if he was in his Legendary SSJ form.