User blog comment:KidVegeta/KidVegeta's reviews/@comment--20110124205257/@comment-3000576-20110125001230

My bloody time to bloody shine!

"I admit, that's too extreme. (Pro-SS11 comment)"
 * 1) Written by supersaiyian11.

- Hyper Zergling

I agree with that completely. AU, although, I couldn't see how you could pull off a f**king sequel to that.
 * 1) Premise of story.
 * 1) Canon screw ups.

"Thievery; you can just upload your own images"
 * 1) '''Using my picture (which DD reuploaded)

- Hyper Zergling

Nope. (Pro-SS11 comment) This story does have some incorrect grammar. Adding on by "Canon-Screw Ups", the anarchy of Vegeta would also be f**ked up. "I agree, but I'd put it in nicer terms."
 * 1) Terrible spelling.
 * 1) Terrible grammar.
 * 1) Terrible Plot expansion.
 * 1) Descriptions of events seemed to be written by a drunk.

- Hyper Zergling

Not only does this break canon (even for AU), it wouldn't make f**king sense. Totally agreeable. "Yeah, he certainly wouldn't. He'd be too busy killing things."
 * 1) Vegeta would be 5 here, not a baby. I think he knows his own name.
 * 1) Random old man (grandpa gohan) is a stupid inclusion.
 * 1) Vegeta wouldn't spend all day crawling to his ship again...

- Hyper Zergling

I don't exactly get what you mean, KV. "Story-wise, at this point, this is actually how saiyans should be (so this is more of a pro-SS11 comment)"
 * 1) The identity crisis.
 * 1) If this "The saiyans are a proud warrior race. They go around the universe and destroy all living things a planet." is all you got out of watching dragon ball, then there is no hope.

- Hyper Zergling

I really don't wanna look back now. "Roshi should be killed instantly, assuming Vegeta is that strong (pro-SS11)"
 * 1) Master Roshi's third person speech.
 * 1) Fight with Roshi was anything but "epic".

- Hyper Zergling

It'd probably take... say... 5 seconds to destroy a town, so, I'd say, along with that energy drainer thing, probably a week to destroy Earth. Same as Roshi. Although, this would probably be much worse. Just, WTF. Say wind, that's bull. Explain it, SS11. This, I'd say curiousity. (Kinda pro-SS11 comment). "He only attacked Piccolo after he punched him" I don't remember that. EVER. Agreeable. It's not the worst, but it's a sad attempt. I could make a better one, but when you read it, I want an admin to delete it, if I'm allowed to make it.
 * 1) If Vegeta could kill roshi in 2 seconds, it would not take 5 months to kill everyone else.
 * 1) Why's Piccolo talking in third person now?
 * 1) '''How the hell did a jar even get on the beach?
 * 1) Even if it did, why would Vegeta find it?
 * 1) And more importantly why did he open it?
 * 1) And even after opening it, why did Vegeta immediately shoot a blast at the creature inside?
 * 1) Shouldn't his curiosity... you know be consistent?
 * 1) I'll tell you why. Because it's a horrible story. The worst ever. Thank god that it's so short because otherwise, I'd be ripping out my eyes by about now.

Read it.