User blog comment:Kagimizu/Dragon Ball Legacies/@comment-1272757-20121109003629

I know I'm a total stranger with only an edit or two to his name on this wiki, and that the name of my story isn't exactly the most original (as I see on here and Fanfiction.net), but can people please review this chapter? I legitimately need the commentary and critique if I'm going to learn and improve.