User blog comment:SSWerty/The Swetty reviews/@comment-3097771-20110323080734/@comment-1668079-20110324053543


 * I didn't mean it in that way, I just thought it a bit odd how quickly she takes him in. I know it's to advance the story, but I would probably have done it a little differently.


 * I felt that you introduced Guva to the Z Fighters far too quickly, and then had the fights between him and Yamcha/Chiaotzu/Tien end too soon. And Ledas's arrival, I felt a bit too unsubtle. He's just there suddenly, and talking to Vegeta, while everyone watches the fights.