User blog comment:Destructivedisk/D-Disk Reviews/@comment-3097771-20110328030157

Thanks for the review. As always with reviews of my stories, I will try to address the cons you listed, as best I can:

Unclear? Dunno what exactly you mean by that. I mean, if you know what all the words I use mean, then it should be no problem. Of course, I’d like examples for this one, please.
 * Although intentional, the verbosity can get tiresome and unclear

Well, this one is kinda complex. I guess I can go into detail about it. Anywho, the main reason that the ending was a bit unclear (ie: Buu being taken by Babidi and nothing happening to Babidi) was basically because I didn’t want to cliché the ending at all by having them defeat the enemy. I mean, I dunno if there even really is an enemy in the whole story (well, a substantive one, anyway). Besides that, the ending was meant to kinda give off that Buu is now living in Uub (however good or bad that may be; I didn’t write it to be pro or con, either way) in sheer reversal of how it was in the chapters where Buu had absorbed Uub. I think that’s exactly what I wanted to have happen, too. This was purely intended; indeed I made it a point to do this. It wasn’t their story, and thus trying to sum up what happened to them would only detract from what I was trying to go at in the end. -KidVegeta
 * It seemed a bit inconclusive near the end, what with everything going back to the way it was before
 * You don't explain what happens to Baba, Babidi, and Goku