User blog comment:KidVegeta/And Sing Victory Everlasting/@comment-3310220-20110130185621/@comment-3122168-20110130200229


 * Needs to be more concise. The story you just presented would have to span several episodes, while Legacies episodes are preferrably no more than 3 episodes.
 * We already know most of that information. You're genuinely just taking a canon concept which has already been fully explained and adding random fanon elements to it.
 * Too much emphasis on coincidence. Katas is randomly struck by lightning and, for whatever reason, is readily able to spit out an egg. Furthermore, the Nameless Namek pushing a random button which just happens to send him to Earth is extremely unlikely.
 * Contradicts Canon. The drought occurs 500 years prior to the events on Namek, meaning that, if Piccolo were to be made 20 years after the end of the drought, it would not make sense in the timeline as Roshi was not alive 480 prior tothe events of Namek. Furthermore, Nail knew the Nameless Namek, and he was not alive at that time according to your story.
 * Random knowledge. How does the Nameless Namek know about the guardians of earth to begin with? It's not common knowledge. Furthermore, there is no reason that he should be able to fly.
 * Note: This is only a basic critique. The real critiue will be far more complex.