User blog comment:SSWerty/Dragon Ball ST/@comment-3201946-20101117050403/@comment-1668079-20101117075732

Heh, oh I know of your gruesome deaths, KidVegeta. I'm an avid fan of The Forgotten (if you notice on my user page I gave it 9 firetrucks out 10).

The reason I don't complain about them is because (don't take offense here) you FF doesn't seem to appeal to younger audiences. It's the kind of story I would avoid if I were several years younger, mainly because it's not, appearance-wise, a very interesting looking story.

Of course, it has a very deep and excellent plot that I and many others enjoy, but the younger users don't seem to have read it, or at least if they have, they don't mention it like they do other fanons.

Now, by fine line I meant when something like this would happen:

''The blood gushed out of his gaping stomach. His entrails and guts dripped out as he staggered across the floor, staining the rug as he struggled. He convulsed in pain, realising another wound had been punctured, this time in the side of his head. Brain matter fell to the floor and the man slumped down dead, with guts, blood and unknown ooze seeping out from his bloody, mangled corpse.''

Now, I made that up on the spot, but you can obviously see that would disturb some of the younger ones here. Now, as far as I know, your fanon doesn't have deaths that graphic, do they?