User blog comment:KidVegeta/KidVegeta's reviews/@comment-3000576-20110624174300/@comment-3000576-20110706132926

Okay, my response:

First up, e'eryone is OOC.

That was on purpose, but I see only chocolateaddictjr nobody likes it.

'''If this is comedy, I'm not feeling it. I don't think any bit of this story was funny in the least.'''

mmk.

'''Chat doesn't censor bad words. We could easily say shit. And we do.'''

My mistake. The chat used to censor bad words, and I'm not on chat that often.

'''Why does everyone randomly leave? The conversation was lackluster to begin with, and it could have helped it to be expanded.'''

Abruptly ended on purpose. I'll probably change that.

NomadMusik initiating the his own talk page discussion is just pointless.

mmk.

Pretty obnoxious sigs if you ask me.

On it.

'''The whole DD/NM bit is rather... terrible, really. Neither of you would talk like that, and even if you did, DD would not ban you for such a little thing.'''

That was on purpose, but I see your point.

NomadMusik's ban until his birthday is so very lame.

Probably will change that.

'''Now, I don't know this KidVegeta character very well, but I would hazard to guess that no, he would not give Mr. Annoyance Bureaucrat status for no reason. I get that it's trying to be funny, but it just comes off as a cheap attempt to get a laugh. I didn't laugh.'''

Gonna change it.

'''"After a long series of KV-like events, he bans every one. " - the "he" is unclear here. It's either KV or MA, but your writing is too vague for us readers to know who.'''

Gonna change it to MA.

'''The ending to this story is where it really fell apart. I think the randomness and shoddy asspulling doesn't make this story any funnier. Sannse's part in this story is just, well, illogical.'''

Gonna change it.

'''The notable errors section is pretty pointless. If you know it has all these things wrong with it, I would suggest fixing them, in an attempt to give this story a little humor.'''

On it.