User blog comment:Hyper Zergling/HZ's Reviews/@comment-3405179-20110213191305

allow me to disprove all your cons

■A lot of ass-pulling, such as a sudden "ultimate plan" that came out of nowhere and was unexplained earlier

What plan? I never mentioned no ultimate plan

■They shouldn't possess a gravity chamber, and what are the measurements of the gravity chamber relative to?

I needed a way for them to get stronger and it is the gravity of their planet is 5x earth's so the gravity is higher

■Hot shouldn't be that strong (zillions, which isn't even a number, but I reckon that it's greater than a trillion), because that would make Frieza not nearly as confident in his abilities in the real universe.

Freiza was conquering the north Galaxy and therefore never heard of Hot because he was conqeuring the South Galaxy ■Hot using "fire" as attacks. If that was the case, then shouldn't Frieza's species be using ice attacks?

The Warmians live on a sun and therefore made of Fire and can become Lava

■Liquid fire is impossible, because fire is energy, not matter. And say fire is plasma or gas, "liquid fire" would be a lot colder than the plasma or gas form.

I was comparing fire to lava in order to explain Hot's transformation from being made of fire to being made of lava. I doubt the great Akira Yoriyama himself could of done a better job. ■Poorly written overall

You try writting a story that is the exact oppisite of The Forgotten in every way plotwise and still good. It aint easy at all