User blog comment:Namekimanie/Namekimanie's reviews/@comment-5869016-20131108100157/@comment-3097771-20131123065118

This will be my last post on the subject. Anyway, in your tiers, you have Bills and Whis (the strongest characters in the DBZ universe by a significant margin) as Tier 2.5. You have characters then that are tiers 3, 4, and 5. They are unbelievably stronger than Bills, Whis (and everyone else who is weaker) These characters are therefore irrelevant to any Dragon Ball character, because they would never be able to fight them. What I'm basically saying is that you are creating numerous characters who are stronger than any DB/DBZ character to the point where it becomes pointless. They can't interact with the DB/DBZ characters in the flavor of the DB Universe (fighting). There is no point to making them this strong. There are also numerous liberties you take with reality and science in general, which makes the characters even bigger messes.

The bottom line is that everything in the DBZ universe is measured by power level. If we apply those to your tiers, the people in tiers 3 and above have power levels potentially larger than can be quantified with the matter of the known universe. There is literally no point to this. Instead of creating characters so strong that they isolate themselves from the universe they are supposed to be a part of (it's weak to say they are very connected to Dragon Ball), you should instead try to focus on making characters who are, in your terms, tier 2.5 or below. That way they can be more relevant to the universe and have actual stories that people will want to read. I would also recommend making the pages much shorter. Instead of having long descriptions of the biographies, just summarize. Create a story page for the entire story. Link to techniques and give those their own pages. I recommend looking at Ledas for an example of this. Granted, I have not finished his page, but most of it is done. Finally, I want to remind you that people want to read stories. They will mostly glance at character pages. Character pages that are excessively long aren't attractive to many users. -KidVegeta (talk)