Talk:Dragon Ball: SB

I can tell this is gonna be as close to The Forgotten as can get (if there's an alien race like The Benefactor, that just confirms my suspicions.)  Nomad Musik  (contribs) Alt. Account 21:59, November 10, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not saying it's a copy, but it's written in a similar fashion to mine, as well as having a simliar plot. I hope this one pans out though, because it looks interesting. There also seems to be an unnaturally high (and thus making it rather...comical) amount of profanity. -KidVegeta

Well, not exactly. Its a bit different. Only the writing style is similar. I got the idea from Dragon Ball SE.

I'm not familiar with SE, but the plot seems similar to mine as well. I'm not saying that's a bad thing, actually I like it. The time period around the genocide of the Saiyans is the most fascinating to me. I hope to see this story pan out. -KidVegeta

Well, I expanded it a bit more to include several more chapters. If you will look at Saga 4, 5 and 6 (The chapters of these sagas) then you will see that this story is apart from The Forgotten.

Yes, I don't doubt it. For what it's worth, my 3rd saga (Planet Earth Saga) will have characters such as Cell, though not in a way I think would be immediately assumed. But I think that's where the similarities end. Your story seems to continue the dragon ball tendency of mass battle, and mine will take a more "death note" like turn. I'm looking forward to seeing just exactly where you take your story. -KidVegeta

Well actually in my story, (SPOLIER ALERT!) Tomoto goes from bad to good and back to bad and then finally to good. He's a bad guy until the Chapter: Asper-Murdered! (Third Saga) and becomes good as he helps to defeat Garlic. Jr (Fourth Saga) then back to bad as he wants to kill Goku for defeating Frieza (as Frieza killed Asper and Tomoto wanted revenge and wanted to kill Frieza himself) and also wants to kill Trunks for actually killing Mecha-Frieza. (Fourth Saga) and becomes good (Sixth Saga). So, in a way, it's set apart. Mine continues a slight retelling of the Dragon Ball Story while yours is completely based on Saiyans.