User blog comment:Raging Blast/New reviaws from Raging Blast!/@comment-3000576-20110123152823


 * Everything happens fast. That's a problem I have with most stories. I really don't know how to fix this.
 * Cell absorbs everyone in like.... 2 mins? I can try to make it longer... but, again, read above. I will try though...
 * Sometimes hard to understand the dialogue. This is a different style of writing. It will be a bit challenging for some.
 * Lust to kill? He killed him under Babidi's control. Honestly, he's the Demon King. I made him sadistic, even insane.
 * F. Cell is someone I'd really don't want to be a Majin. This is a personal opinion, but I'll respond anyway. He has Vegeta's cells, so he was, typically, the best candidate. Try thinking of someone (besides Future Trunks, cause he will) else becoming a Majin in F. Trunk's timeline.