User blog:SonikFan112/Sonik's Reviews

Hello people, of the internet. Since reviews are all the rage these days and KV said I should do reviews (okay, maybe he didn't say that exactly) I'm going to do this review blog.

RATINGS

S

A

B

C

D

E

''' WITH YOU POWERS COMBINED, I AM CAPTAIN REVIEW! '''

Pros

 * A more in-depth explanation of Krillin's Orin Temple training. Good since that wasn't a very explained part of Krillin's backstory.
 * It's interesting. After the whole scene with the other monks, I really did see what happened to Krillin.
 * You manged to include "dirty magazines" without making it look nor sound humorous. That's a pretty big thing for me.
 * Krillin has a more realistic decision than what most fanfic writers would of made him do. Instead of staying and trying to rise up, he leaves to find a better master.

Cons
RATING: A+
 * The story is short, but I can understand this as in-story it only lasts a night.
 * Other than that, I can't find anything else that's serious enough to make me dislike it.

CLOSING THOUGHTS: An amazing story from our friend Brady Patrick. While short, I managed to enjoy this story quite a bit. The reason I didn't give it an S is because the story is so short. I managed to get through it in 3-4 minutes.