User blog comment:SSWerty/The Swetty reviews/@comment-3122168-20110325070633

Well, I like your review, and agree with most of the points. However, I have to say the following: Say what you will about this, but this was a writing experiment which I felt worked out quite well. Rather than having to write out the pure dialog segments in normal prose, it was more efficient and easier to read it in a drama format. I do somewhat see where you are coming from, I guess. Well, honestly, anything other than Tien dying a hero's death like he did wouldn't have made much sense. He was in a head-on battle with a person far stronger than him, thus meaning that he probably should die. Tying it into the destruction of the original Saiyan Planet simply seemed fitting to me. For clarification, are you asking about how he knew that Kordar was his dad or how he knew that Kordar's wife was having a baby?
 * I would have preferred if you had kept the writing style the same throughout, rather than swapping to KV's format.
 * The ending. I know it was for the story, and too cliched it would be to have Tien return to Earth unscathed, but I dislike the finale. Much like I did the Bartimaeus Trilogy's.
 * How does Tien know about his birth while watching his dad die?