User blog comment:KidVegeta/Lauto Saga completed!/@comment-72.196.104.32-20110612001732

Okay not it makes sense, it's just that time passage isn't very clear when reading the story. My only real criticism for this story would be the character development of Ledas. He seems to jump around alot. He goes from being all innocent and almost Goten like through most of the Prince Vegeta Saga then toward the end of the saga he's all of the sudden being cruel to workers and murders the Space Pod guy... Then in the Lauto Saga he seems to mature at some points then regress to being innocent again at later points (like when training with Leime)... Other than that the story is great so far : )