User blog comment:SSWerty/The Swetty reviews/@comment-3097771-20110323080734

Prince Vegeta Saga gets a bit tedious after awhile, especially after his first mission

Hmm, I’ve heard this from a few other sources.

Lauto saga was far too long; that was the reason why I initially dropped off following it

I agree. In hindsight, I think it would have been better to make it much, much shorter. That and the overall story of it could prolly easily fit into 12 episodes. This is pretty much the reason all the other sagas are only 12 episodes. I don’t disagree with this con at all.

In fact, I may go back and rework the first two sagas after I’ve finished the entirety of it. Well, it would be the entire series, but the first two sagas would get the most re-working I think. Dunno. I haven’t actually read the story myself, so I don’t know what works and what doesn’t. XD

The orange font hurts my eyes a little when reading Lauto.

Cool story bro.

Guva and Banas; they bore me

I can see this. Probably my fault somehow, but I’m more interested into what exactly bores you about them.

Ledas in PES saga is a bit too much like kid Goku/Goten for me

Maybe. You’re prolly talking about his innocence or whatever, which I think is fine considering he’s an alien who has no idea what humans are like. Regardless, this sort of thing is intentional and I wouldn’t change it.

Mrs. Fanshi taking Ledas in straight away; a bit creepy, if you ask me

Sure, man. Maybe I should show you some redacted shit from her life.

The Reunion saga feels rushed and not at the same quality of your other works

Oh jeez, I don’t think so at all. Out of all the sagas, this is the one which I’ve spent the most time on the actual writing. I’ll admit though that the planning stages for PES took the longest overall though. But meh, to this con.

I was kinda easy on you with this, but I’ll definitely be much more bitchy if you insult my precious IR. Got it? XD -KidVegeta