Board Thread:New on Dragonball Fanon Wiki/@comment-33034985-20180904202015/@comment-5035900-20180904205415

Off the bat, giving Turles more of an origin, as well as seeing additional children of the Saiyans is a welcome concept. And there's many possibilities with where to go by changing Dragon Ball's history.

Obviously you've just started, so I'm sure the cast'll be more fleshed out as time goes on, but if I had to nitpick something at the moment, the grammar could use some improvement. Granted, it's a simple enough fix, so it's nothing that'll really sink your story, though patching it up will help tremendously down the line.

Good luck with Changing History.