Talk:DragonBall: Dark Age

I Got Tiger Blood, Man:
My review:

Pros:

 * Somewhat better grammar than what I expected.

Cons:

 * Although an interesting premise, the base plot, even with spectacular writing, has one problem: It turns something shown even in the manga and pass it off as lies. I understand this is AU, but I don't like it one bit.
 * Alas, the grammar isn't that great.
 * The wrestling event with Raditz and Turles was... short and relied on coincidence to land in the ship.
 * Why would all of the Z-Warriors be in the same restaurant at the same time? Tien and Chiaotzu secluded themselves from others, so all of it relied on coincidence.
 * You never stated what happened to Turles. Although, I'm probably gonna have to wait.

Rating: 1.4, although I rushed in this review. My heart's a broken stereo. Skipping beats like a broken metronome . 23:35, October 31, 2011 (UTC)